Thlogg #7

So this week was a bit difficult because I had a hard time getting through it. I was not feeling my best and it was a struggle to do everything but I got it done!.
I went ahead and looked over what we did in class since I was unable to attend and I want to answer my freewrite here.
I think that one thing I have improved on since WP1 has been my thesis statement. I think that WP1 was difficult in the sense that I did not feel completely comfortable on what I was focusing on so it made my topic a bit difficult to write on. I mean I think I did great overall on my entire paper but the thesis was hard to pick out because I had a lot going on at once BUT this time around that was not the case. I actually was able to write my thesis fairly quickly right after doing my entire essay. I knew exactly what I wanted to focus on and how I wanted it to do it and I made it very clear. Another thing I think I improved on was the structure of my paper. For my first WP1 I had a lot of good ideas but did not know how to put it all together to make it flow easily but this time around I knew exactly what point I wanted to hit and how to hit it perfectly.
I also went over the tips which are usually very helpful but I did not know exactly what the "attack the page" tip meant. Is it like just write what you are thinking? I am kind of confused on that but I would like to maybe learn about it from one of my peers if possible. I would of also liked to do the socrative. I think that would have been a very helpful tool for me. But I did look at two other of my classmates papers once all their edits were done from class and I kind of got a feel for it so I touched mine up a bit.
I did do what we did last time with breaking up the sentences one by one and highlighting so I am pretty positive about this WP2, I think I did good on my own.